Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
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Thursday, February 11, 2016

Week 4 Storytelling: A Band of Demons


"A Band of Demons"

"Okay, okay, just let me sing it one more time," Greyson said.

I groaned. "Seriously? You've been singing it for weeks."

"Yes," he said. "And I am singing it again."

I rolled my eyes as he burst into singing his favorite song, from his favorite metal band, Nocturnal Pandemonium. Soon his singing turned into a low growl, and then a high-pitched screech.

I liked metal, and I liked the band, but I hated the song after hearing it now, probably, about a hundred times in the past week. Living with Greyson was tiring at times, but I loved him.

I was tossed around foster home after foster home until I was fostered at Greyson's house. We were both twelve at the time, and we just clicked. His mom ended up adopting me, and I became his sister.

Now, 16, we were inseparable, but that had it's annoyances like now. But, I was here to support him.

"Hey, Ember, you think I got a chance?" He asked.

"Well, you look like you're already part of the band," I said.

His pale skin was smeared with black, and his eye were lined with smokey eye makeup that I had applied for him. He also wore an ensemble that I helped him sew, made of faux-leather.

He looked like everyone else from the band, except for his white blonde hair that went to his shoulders. The others had black hair, but since he was trying out to be their lead vocalist, he thought he'd try to stand out. After all, he was trying out to be the star after the previous Vocalist's untimely drug-induced demise.

The line moved forward, and we were the next to go in.

"I'm so excited!" He chirped.

"Really?" I asked, dripping with sarcasm.

But before Greyson could say anything, the bouncer opened the door and ushered us in.

It was a dingy dive bar with a stage, that we'd seen them play on countless times. The band was on stage, with their two guitarists, bassist, and drummer. There was a stand with a mic in the middle.

The whole band was wearing their usual leather outfits, and all had black hair in assorted wild haircuts. To finish the look they all had black makeup on, black paint smeared on their bodies, and most of them had piercings on their face.

In front of the stage were all the people that were in the line with us. I assumed that after they tried out that they stood in that crowd.

"Alright, who is the next," Asmodeous, the lead guitarist said, and then growled, "Victim?"

Each band member was named after a demon.

His eyes flickered over to us, and his eyes stopped at me.

"That'd be me!" Greyson shouted, and ran towards the side of the stage.

Asmodeous' eyes didn't waver, but were fixated on me, even as Greyson stepped in front of the mic. He finally broke the gaze, and turned to Greyson.

"What song?" Belezebub, the bassist, asked.

"Home Sweet Hell," Greyson said.

"Nice," Azazel, the drummer, said. "A classic, huh?"

Greyson nodded, and tapped his thigh as the band broke into the song. He sang and growled flawlessly. He sounded just like the old vocalist.

"Alright, thanks," Asmodeous said as soon as the song was over. "Now, join the others and we'll nakje our decision when we've heard everyone."

And suddenly his eyes were on me, again. I couldn't say I minded too much. I mean he was gorgeous. He had silky black hair that was choppily cut, and framed his face. He had wild black eye makeup around bright green eyes and a black lip piercing. He only wore a vest, and exposed a well-defined chest and abs, smeared with black paint.

(Asmodeous. Image Source.) 

"What about you?" Asmodeous asked, his eyes on me.

"What?" I muttered.

"Come on, get up here," he said.

"I'm not trying out--I'm just here for my brother!"

"So what? Get up here," he said.

"I don't even sing!"

"There's not a lot of singing involved, honestly," he said, and the rest of the band and the crowd laughed.

Greyson looked uncomfortable. I didn't want to steal his thunder.

Besides, I wasn't dressed up enough. I had on a pair of black skinny jeans with countless holes in them, and a black and white tanktop. Not to mention, my black hair was probably a tangled mess, and my eyeliner was likely smeared.

"Come on, come here," Asmodeous said, and I felt a strange pull as if I were on a string and he pulled me until I was in front of the mic and everyone in the crowd.

My heart thudded and I could hardly breathe. How was I supposed to sing? Let alone scream like a metal vocalist?

"What's your favorite song?" Asmodeous asked.

"Nocturnal Bloodlust," I said and suddenly the band was playing the song. It was time for me to scream and suddenly a gutteral cry came out of my throat. I sounded just like the old vocalist. I surprised myself, and the crowd seemed just as surprised that a girl could scream like that.

The chorus came up and I sang in a voice I didn't know I had. When the song was over, I stood in shock.

Asmodeous looked at me, and he walked over to the rest of the band. They looked like they were talking, but I didn't hear any voices. He turned around, and clapped his hands together, "Well, we have made our decision!"

"There's still people waiting outside," someone shouted.

"I don't care, we have our new vocalist: Ember," Asmodecous said.

I stumbled back. I never told him my name.

"After all, we need a demon for our band of demons," Asmodeous said and winked. His eyes had flames in them.

For a moment I looked at the band and they all have twisted black horns, claws, and red eyes. I stumbled back from them, and fell in front of a mirror.

To my horror found the same pair of horns, claws, and my eyes glowed bright red.

I was a demon, just like all of them.

"Welcome to the band, Lilith," Asmodecous said, and held a hand out to me. I grabbed it, and he pulled me up and into a kiss that tasted like campfires and burned like hot coals.

(Lilith AKA: Ember. Image Source)
Author's Note:
I feel bad for Greyson though, he really wanted to be the new vocalist! But, it is a band of demons after all, and Ember, as it turns out, is actually a demon. And, not only a demon, but to clarify: she is probably the reincarnation of Lilith, the famous female demon!

I also want to clarify: the demons can appear as human, but other demons can see their demonic form. However, if they wanted to show their demonic form to humans, they can. This is similar to how the Rakshasa are in the Indian Epics that we've been reading.

This week I read Wilson's "Rama's Quest", and in section one it had a line of words that Insprited the entire story. It said that there was a "band of demons." Of course they meant a group of demons (Rakshasa,) but I thought how cool if they were an actual BAND of demons!

And of course I put my Young Adult spin on it, since I am a Young Adult author. I also snuck in a little bit of romance in there at the end, since I usually add that into my stories.

So, I made this another with a girl discovering that she is a demon, because that is one of my favorite sort of stories. I thought especially for this story that it would be a nice plot twist.

Additionally, I made these demons look more like our Western view of demons, and not quite like in the Ramayana.

Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Reading Diary B: Wilson. Rama's Quest

Rama's Quest Part B:
Section 9: The Battle Begins

  • Being alone with "Night".
  • Lying to the princess, telling her that the prince is dead. Even uses magic to make an illusion of his head.
  • Fainting heart was revived.
  • The sound of brass instruments and snarling and growling.
  • A God-like radiance, supernatural magic.
  • "Remember the greatness of my heart, be true to thyself."
  • Mission: to clear the world of evil. (Rakshasa) 
  • Story Idea: a story about Rakshasa, or demon Hunter's. I previously thought of having a duo of brothers or sisters. Like the show Supernatural, but they only hunt demons (or Rakshasas.) Perhaps they hunt them because the demons killed their parents. Their ultimate goal is to kill Ravana, King of the Demons.

Section 10: Kumbhakarna Awakens

  • The Demon King, Ravana, has a brother named Kumbhakarna. He is mischevous, but without malice. He is fairly dim.
  • Dancing maidens.

Section 11: The Fight Continues

  • Rama, friend of all living (good) creatures (Unless Rakshasa are not considered to be "living"?)
  • Narada, messenger of the Gods.
  • God takes a form of a human in order to kill the evil of the world. 
  • Referring to the story idea in Section 9, maybe one of the brothers (or sisters, depending which one I pick to go with) is actually a God or Goddess of the hunt, and they are imbued with supernatural abilities as a result, sort of like with Rama.
  • Beautiful, magical weapons. The magical bow.
  • An army of creatures (in this case, monkeys.)
  • Kumbhakarna falls dead.
  • Fighting in a chariot.

Section 12: Rama's Victory

  • Chariot of the Gods.
  • Fighting between Light and Darkness. 
  • "Aim for the heart, the seat of darkness." Maybe that is the only way to kill Rakshasa (or demons) is similar to vampires: a stake through the heart!
  • Maybe demon Hunter's also use a bow or a crossbow (to make it a little more modern,) or perhaps even a gun to take it even more modern. Maybe the gun has wooden bullets. (This will be used in the story proposed in Section 9.)
Section 13: Sita Tested

  • "Rama is victorious. Ravana is dead."
  • A palanquin is like a lectica (from the time of the Greeks and the Romans.) A box carried with poles and people carry this vehicle.
  • Princess dressed in beautiful clothes and jewels and perfumed.
  • "The demon of great jealousy took" them over.

Reading Diary A: Wilson. Rama's Quest

Rama's Quest Part A:
(Rama. Image Source)
Section 1: Rama and Sita


  • "A deep shadow in this city of sunshine."
  • A sacrifice to gain the God's favor.
  • Rama has extraoridinary strength, skill, bravery and beauty.
  • A large amount of creatures will be useful to someone at some time.
  • A community of hermits.
  • A band of demons! (What if the story is about a popular rock BAND that is comprised of DEMONS, in other words, a band of demons!)
  • Tarika, the ogress.
  • Attacking with a bow, and having great archery skills.
Section 2: Rama's Exile


  • Winning a lady (or man) through a tournament, or contest.
  • Banished for 14 years.
  • Lovers that cannot be seperated. ("I will follow you into Hell...")
  • A royal chariot.
Section 3: Bharata and Rama


  • An exiled individual being begged to come back.
  • Golden sandals.
  • Going from hermitage to hermitage.
Section 4: Life in the Forest


  • Magical powers. Hermits who possess magical powers.
  • The princess being dressed up in beautiful garments.
  • A wife and husband hermitage.
  • Rakshasas.
Section 5: Ravana and Sita


  • The damsel in distress, taken by the Rakshasa.
  • A hermit taking form of a warrior.
  • Guarding a treasure.
  • A rainfall of flowers.
  • Ravana, King of the Rakshasa.
Section 6: The Monkeys


  • Taking form of a Golden deer.
  • A dying vulture tells a tale.
  • Sugriva, the monkey King.
  • Moving as fast as the wind.
  • Being carried on someone's back.
Section 7: Hanuman in Lanka


  • Hanuman, son of the wind.
  • A garland of scarlet flowers. (More flower imagry)
Section 8: Sita and Hanuman


  • Isle of Rakshasas
  • Many stolen women in the lair of the evil demon king. 
  • "A lion among men."
  • Prince of monkeys.
  • Hanuman's tail set on fire.
  • Spirit of the Sea, Queen of the Ocean.
  • In order to gain access into Ravana's realm, they must build a mole, which I looked up and found is a type of pier or structure built on an ocean.
  • What if Ravana's Realm is a demonic world. (Story idea: focusing on world, exploring what the world of demons would be like. Use it to introduce Ravana and his Prince's and princesses. Ravana will be more humanized and a hybrid of the Western conventional idea of a demon and the concept of vampires.)